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a whimper from a dark corner decided
she had been suffering for too long
no more
did she
want to be
crying in the dark
broken on
the floor
she lay
when she found the gun
she aimed and squeezed the trigger
the bullet shattered an empty heart
inhaling
one last
breath of life
eyes glaze
blood flies
he dies
silently
she was too scared of what she might miss
if the bullet had penetrated her own flesh
so instead
the gun
rested upon
his chest
from where
crimson blood fell
she had been suffering for too long
no more
did she
want to be
crying in the dark
broken on
the floor
she lay
when she found the gun
she aimed and squeezed the trigger
the bullet shattered an empty heart
inhaling
one last
breath of life
eyes glaze
blood flies
he dies
silently
she was too scared of what she might miss
if the bullet had penetrated her own flesh
so instead
the gun
rested upon
his chest
from where
crimson blood fell
About no one in particular. It was inspired by the lines "I squeezed the trigger and the bullet shatterd her heart, she died instantly" from some story or another I read in school.
My first poem attempt, corrections and tips welcome.
My first poem attempt, corrections and tips welcome.
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Luv it well done ur really talented